Post by Jesse " Cadre" Hansen on Sept 20, 2004 20:50:25 GMT -5
This is a piece that Jay has in production already... hope you all enjoy.
Sample Script by: Jay La Valley
Merlin's Ring # 0 (prelude)
By Jay La Valley
PAGE 1:
Panel 1:
We see Morgana le Fey, standing in front of a brutish looking Ogre, who is wearing armor and carrying a large wicked looking mace. The Ogre looks nervously down upon his mistress. The Ogre is Hulk-like in size and appearance.
Morgana: You do understand what it is I want you to do? Don't you!
Ogre: Yesss my Queen. I am to cause as much chaos as I possibly can.
Panel 2:
The Ogre fades out as he is transported to Camelot.
Morgana: Good! Now be off with you, and do not fail me.
: You know the price for failure.
Panel 3:
We are now inside Camelot, in the market place to be precise. Screams are heard as the Ogre materializes amongst the crowd.
Cap: Elsewhere: Inside the gates, of Camelot.
Ogre: Time to have some fun.
PAGE 2:
Panel 1:
We find the Ogre is tossing people (knights and assorted other people) around like rag dolls, and causing all kinds of Chaos.
:Heeeelp. Aaargghh. IEEEIII. (and assorted other screams)
Panel 2:
We see an Ogre smash the mace into the face of a nearby knight who is slowly approaching the monster.
Ogre: EAT MACE!!!
Knight: Ugh
Panel 3:
Meanwhile: In Merlin's lab we see a tired and worn out Merlin, who is slumped in a large chair. Merlin is not wearing a ring.
Merlin: [thoughts]: What a day.
Panel 4:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We find Merlin directing several very large giants, who are carrying, placing, and building Stonehenge [Good sized panel] The job is about halfway done. We see a goblin sneaking around the semi-completed Stonehenge, with a large bush.
Merlin: Good, good. Things are progressing nicely.
Panel 5: [Inside Panel 4]:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Close-up of the goblin, who we see putting the bush into it under its foot, or if the giant is wearing sandals of some sort then placing the bush between the sandal and the bottom of its foot.
PAGE 3:
Panel 1:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Close-up of the Goblin. We see the Goblin setting fire to the bush. [small panel]
Goblin: HEHEHEHE
Panel 2:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We see that the giant is holding a large stone, even as the bush continues to burn.
Panel 3:
Dreamscape / Flashback: The Giant screams as the he realizes that someone has given him a hot foot, this causes him to drop/toss the stone. We see the stone flying/falling through the air as if through multiple panels.
Giant: AAARRRGGGHH!
Panel 4:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Off to the side we see the Goblin laughing his ass off, even as the giant hold his foot. We see the stone land inside Stonehenge.
Panel 5:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Close-up of the Giant's face In particular his eyes. In the Giant's eyes we can see the Goblin laughing. [Long Panel]
Giant: Why you
PAGE 4:
Panel 1:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We see the hand of the Giant grab the goblin, who fits entirely with the hand.
: Now…
Panel 2:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We see the Giant smash the goblin in his hand on to the stone that he dropped into the middle of Stonehenge. Blood flows from where the Goblin is covering the stone.
: …DIE!
Panel 3:
Back in Merlin's lab: Merlin is roused from his flashback/dreams as the screaming reaches his ears.
Merlin: What in the nine &@%%$
: Well I had better be prepared.
Panel 4:
We see Merlin open a hidden secret compartment, where in we see 2 golden rings. We see Merlin's hand pick up one of the rings.
Panel 5:
As seen through Morgana's Crystal/fire or whatever (Check in MR 1 for item) we see Merlin closing the hidden compartment.
Morgana: At last!!!
: I have you now Merlin, you shall not foil my plans now.
Sample Script by: Jay La Valley
Merlin's Ring # 0 (prelude)
By Jay La Valley
PAGE 1:
Panel 1:
We see Morgana le Fey, standing in front of a brutish looking Ogre, who is wearing armor and carrying a large wicked looking mace. The Ogre looks nervously down upon his mistress. The Ogre is Hulk-like in size and appearance.
Morgana: You do understand what it is I want you to do? Don't you!
Ogre: Yesss my Queen. I am to cause as much chaos as I possibly can.
Panel 2:
The Ogre fades out as he is transported to Camelot.
Morgana: Good! Now be off with you, and do not fail me.
: You know the price for failure.
Panel 3:
We are now inside Camelot, in the market place to be precise. Screams are heard as the Ogre materializes amongst the crowd.
Cap: Elsewhere: Inside the gates, of Camelot.
Ogre: Time to have some fun.
PAGE 2:
Panel 1:
We find the Ogre is tossing people (knights and assorted other people) around like rag dolls, and causing all kinds of Chaos.
:Heeeelp. Aaargghh. IEEEIII. (and assorted other screams)
Panel 2:
We see an Ogre smash the mace into the face of a nearby knight who is slowly approaching the monster.
Ogre: EAT MACE!!!
Knight: Ugh
Panel 3:
Meanwhile: In Merlin's lab we see a tired and worn out Merlin, who is slumped in a large chair. Merlin is not wearing a ring.
Merlin: [thoughts]: What a day.
Panel 4:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We find Merlin directing several very large giants, who are carrying, placing, and building Stonehenge [Good sized panel] The job is about halfway done. We see a goblin sneaking around the semi-completed Stonehenge, with a large bush.
Merlin: Good, good. Things are progressing nicely.
Panel 5: [Inside Panel 4]:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Close-up of the goblin, who we see putting the bush into it under its foot, or if the giant is wearing sandals of some sort then placing the bush between the sandal and the bottom of its foot.
PAGE 3:
Panel 1:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Close-up of the Goblin. We see the Goblin setting fire to the bush. [small panel]
Goblin: HEHEHEHE
Panel 2:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We see that the giant is holding a large stone, even as the bush continues to burn.
Panel 3:
Dreamscape / Flashback: The Giant screams as the he realizes that someone has given him a hot foot, this causes him to drop/toss the stone. We see the stone flying/falling through the air as if through multiple panels.
Giant: AAARRRGGGHH!
Panel 4:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Off to the side we see the Goblin laughing his ass off, even as the giant hold his foot. We see the stone land inside Stonehenge.
Panel 5:
Dreamscape / Flashback: Close-up of the Giant's face In particular his eyes. In the Giant's eyes we can see the Goblin laughing. [Long Panel]
Giant: Why you
PAGE 4:
Panel 1:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We see the hand of the Giant grab the goblin, who fits entirely with the hand.
: Now…
Panel 2:
Dreamscape / Flashback: We see the Giant smash the goblin in his hand on to the stone that he dropped into the middle of Stonehenge. Blood flows from where the Goblin is covering the stone.
: …DIE!
Panel 3:
Back in Merlin's lab: Merlin is roused from his flashback/dreams as the screaming reaches his ears.
Merlin: What in the nine &@%%$
: Well I had better be prepared.
Panel 4:
We see Merlin open a hidden secret compartment, where in we see 2 golden rings. We see Merlin's hand pick up one of the rings.
Panel 5:
As seen through Morgana's Crystal/fire or whatever (Check in MR 1 for item) we see Merlin closing the hidden compartment.
Morgana: At last!!!
: I have you now Merlin, you shall not foil my plans now.
